Author's Comments:

Czar Squid, 29 Apr 2011 01:41 am

Originally this battle was going to last about 15 pages. Now I'm actually trying to condense it the best I can. Right now it's 3 pages less than originally planned. The nice thing about doing this is that it forces me to remove the boring stuff (If that's even possible).

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User's Comments:

Lord Enigma, 29 Apr 2011 03:40 pm

That girl is a troublesome one. Also clouds apparently kill people.

Czar Squid, 29 Apr 2011 04:37 pm

Clouds killing people or people using clouds to commit suicide. I like having choices.

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